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Libérés
Free
So why don't I feel free?
I'm rid of you
As I wanted to be.
Freed of your problems
Your hate
Your love.
So why is my heart dragging
A mile behind me?
Emptiness.
Darkness.
My hate is gone
But so if my love.
Now, nothing is left
But a big, black hole.
I liked it better
When I hated you
And even better
When I loved you.
Libérés
What a meaningless expression.
Libérés
I'm falling into the hole left behind.
Free
So why don't I feel free?
I'm rid of you
As I wanted to be.
Freed of your problems
Your hate
Your love.
So why is my heart dragging
A mile behind me?
Emptiness.
Darkness.
My hate is gone
But so if my love.
Now, nothing is left
But a big, black hole.
I liked it better
When I hated you
And even better
When I loved you.
Libérés
What a meaningless expression.
Libérés
I'm falling into the hole left behind.
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Another spur-of-the-moment, emotional poem. I think only a few of you will understand it... no matter. it kind of goes along with my drawings "Tempt, Fall, and Break" and "Libérés." Hope you like.
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ahhh yes...the aftershock...after the original rage...is the most painful. the most everlasting.
luv, give your heart to someone who can keep it safe, okay? i want to see you smile again. i want to hear you laugh.
luv, give your heart to someone who can keep it safe, okay? i want to see you smile again. i want to hear you laugh.